Hi Cyrus – You did very well on your first assignment for WRK100! You did a nice

Hi Cyrus – You did very well on your first assignment for WRK100! You did a nice job on describing the different skills and explaining how they will be valuable in the workplace. See my video, and let’s review your assignment! Also, please review my feedback below, and then, if you want, you can re-write and resubmit this assignment to address the areas I’ve noted, and I’ll then re-grade the assignment. OK . . .let’s get started!
Congratulations on submitting your first assignment! The end zone is in your sights, but you just need a little bit more. You did a good job describing your skills, however, I am looking for some more details. Feel free to refer to the chart in Learn Week 1 to get started, but don’t forget to cite!
You should be proud of the time and effort you put in to this assignment, I know I’m proud of you! Nice job discussing the importance of your skills to the future of work. In the future, try to be a little more descriiptive. Add a little more detail to bring it home!
The examples you shared of how these skills will make you more valuable to an employer were really good. Being able to share this will help you when interviewing. I am proud of your participation thus far!
There were a handful of grammatical errors throughout your assignment. It is important to proofread for spelling and grammar errors. Utilize the built-in spell-check function in Blackboard or online tools like Grammarly.com to catch any mistakes before submitting your post. This will make it easier for me to read and understand what you want to convey.