Hello dear writer, in this essay i would like you to edit my draft ( even deleti

Hello dear writer, in this essay i would like you to edit my draft ( even deleting some stuff/ doing from scratch if neccessary ) as well as fixing the referencings for the stuff that is going to be kept. However the main thing ( using the given sources and instructions ) the text based on the diagram should explain about 9q, 9p deletions and monosomy 21, and based on the diagram it must explain the HAL and its limitations in relation to the diagram, as well as the viability of each (9q 9p 21mon), also the percentage of male gametes generated via this segregation pattern in general. As well as adj1, adj2 and alternate in general, as in how common each one is, numbers can be included too, like the amount of such cases (ex: 1/1000000) and so on.