For our dissertation we had to choose a theme to write the dissertation about an

For our dissertation we had to choose a theme to write the dissertation about and I chose business ethics and CSR , we had to create our own question to write 4000 words about , the question which I created was ‘ how can Microsoft corporation incorporate business ethics and corporate social responsibility for mutual benefits and sustainable business strategies ?’ , I had written a proposal and I will link the proposal I did down below so you get good understanding and I will also link the feedback which I received as I was told to narrow down my research question more so can you do that please before you start the work , can you please look at the feedback of the proposal before you begin the dissertation please and the question needs to be fixed and i will link the dissertation guide it is really important that you follow the guidelines and instructions please , theirs a layout which explains what you need to write in each section the methodology etc , please read the proposal and feedback for it first so you can fix it then read the dissertation guideline before you start the work Thankyou