– firstly, I need you to rewrite a paper that I already wrote but there are spec

– firstly, I need you to rewrite a paper that I already wrote but there are specific things that I want you to focus on while rewriting ( i attached a file on how you should rewrite it please focus on them )
– secondly, i need you to do a cover letter on what you changed in the rewriting part and why you change it ( i add more information in the attached file please read it )