Dear writer, You will need to do extensive research so that you are effectively

Dear writer,
You will need to do extensive research so that you are effectively and faithfully presenting the current ‘thinking’ in relation to each topic. Each key point you make needs to be validated with empirical research – this is what will validate your argument and makes your work persuasive. It would be best if you spent more time constructing effective sentences and paragraphs.Each sentence needs to address an assessment task directly. Please go through the task description and marking criteria and follow each guideline. Please contact me for clarity with any area.