Complete the Revel exercise below. Submit your response in a word document throu

Complete the Revel exercise below. Submit your response in a word document through this link.
Examine the following excerpt from a student paper. Proofread it, catching as many mechanical errors as possible. Note punctuation mistakes, agreement problems, misspellings, and anything else that seems off. Copy the passage into a word document and use the strike-through or red-line feature to note changes needed.
In an important essay, Melody Graulich notes how “rigid dichotomizing of sex roles” in most frontier myths have “often handicapped and confused male as well as female writers (187),” she wonders if a “universel mythology” (198) might emerge that is less confining for both of them. In Bruce Mason, Wallace Stegner seems to experiment with this idea; acknowledging the power of Bo’s male fantasies and Elsa’s ability to teach her son to feel. It is his strenth. On the other hand, Bruces brother chet, who dies young, lost and broken, seems doomed because he lacked sufficient measure of both the feminine and masculine. He observes that Chet had “enough of the old man to spoil him, ebnough of his mother to soften him, not enough of either to save him (Big Rock, 521).”