Abstract is only correction needed, read the comment on the Abstract page. Your

Abstract is only correction needed, read the comment on the Abstract page.
Your PAS abstract was reviewed. It still needs significant work. I cannot be your editor, but I made some comments. I strongly suggest you discuss this with a professional editor showing the editor the requirements for the content of the abstract. The abstract can be the most difficult part of the entire dissertation because you are summarizing everything into one page, but must do so according to the University guidelines.