High school application essay. Highly competitive where the essay and interview

High school application essay. Highly competitive where the essay and interview can be the difference. 30% acceptance rate. I went to a small private Lutheran school that I loved since kindergarten. The schools motto is Be Kind. Mission statement is to have a culture of academic excellence combined with accountability and dedication to community.
The high school has almost 50 clubs, an amazing theatre program, a Tv/film department and outstanding athletics.
Mission statement:
Human Dignity as a principle that drives our interest to serve students, faculty/staff, alumni and our greater community.  We are a place where community and connectivity are centered and where each day we strive to Life Life Like a Champion.
Communal
Name School aims to promote an active interest in the well being of others, understanding, and acceptance of diverse cultures and an awareness of the responsibilities of citizenship. 
Intellectual
We seek a curriculum that meets the highest standards of accreditation and society, preparing students for college and post-secondary pursuits, and which fully develops students′ skills for communication and critical thinking.
Personal
Name School seeks to mold students who value themselves and others, who apply gospel values in moral decision-making, who have a strong aesthetic sense, and who exhibit self-discipline and a cooperative spirit.
I’m eager and excited to be a part of a large school with big opportunities and discover my interest.
Having been involved in yearbook for the past 3 years I def want to purse it at Name School and not only do I want to join animal advocates, lemonade warriors and maybe start a club to educate others on special needs and autism because my brother is autistic snd I volunteer for autism awareness.
I really appreciate the school listens to the students that has respect for that and was impressed to see that they brought puppies in to help the students with anxiety over finals and they gave them extra days and rescheduled finals because the students asked for it and it’s great to be a part of a culture that demands respect but also gives respect.
I know that I am a great fit for the school because everything in his mission statement is part of my personal mission statements and because when I visited I couldn’t stop smiling and being dizzy as with the students and the admissions director was contagious and I’ve never wanted to go anywhere else and God willing this is where I will be fall 2022.
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I have tried to write this several times and I keep getting stuck it sounds too generic or too fake suck up or it wanders all over the place.
I need to have a compelling first sentence and it leads to show my enthusiasm and the uniqueness but also willing to take risks and be accountable four my education in my future while being considerate and caring towards my community.
They want it to be around 500 words but don’t care if you go over if it’s necessary.
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