I did this PowerPoint presentation however.. this failed. I want you to fully re

I did this PowerPoint presentation however.. this failed.
I want you to fully rewrite this and ensure my tutors comments are Addressed and the brief is fully met
Please don’t plagiarise
Iv attached a file with a list of the health problems Can you please change the health problems to one of those listed
I need to pass this time so please ensure all feedbakx is addressed
You can keep slides more brief and eye catching and have notes on each slide which I can read from
Also see the attached example