I need help writing a supplemental essay for a physician Assistant program I am

I need help writing a supplemental essay for a physician Assistant program I am applying to. I know what I want to say, I just don’t know how to make it sound fancy/appealing.
Some points on the school:
• They have a longer curriculum (three years whereas most schools do two years). I actually appreciate this because they dedicate more time to their students and culminating more well-rounded PAs
• they have an awesome simulation lab where students can practice their skills before moving on to actual patients.
• most of all, I love that their PA students work closely with their medical students. Physician assistants collaborate with doctors, nurses, nurse practitioners and other healthcare individuals to achieve patient safety, optimal health outcomes, and promote health education. This style of training prepares their students to learn how to work with other healthcare professionals before going out into the field