Hi, thank you so much for your help! I’m currently applying to grad school for d

Hi, thank you so much for your help! I’m currently applying to grad school for dietetics and would love assistance spicing up my personal statement. I am having a lot of trouble articulating my thoughts into words and making everything cohesive. The page limit is 5 pages, so I obviously need to trim it. Thank you so much again!
For this school, it needs to cover:
-Tell us why you chose to apply to the USC Leonard Davis School of Gerontology
-Tell us about your experiences in gerontology
-Tell us which faculty you are interested in working with and why
-Describe your research experience and goals
-Describe your educational and career goals
-Please describe your strengths and weaknesses