I have attached my paper that was written by a colleague. This paper did not mee

I have attached my paper that was written by a colleague. This paper did not meet several requirements and was sent back from my professor for revision. I am attaching the current paper, I have highlighted in red ink the areas that need to be corrected.
Please when you add your information to correct can you use blue ink so I can identify the corrections made?
thank you, Merry Xmax