I‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍ have 2000 words written previously, and it wasn’t written

I‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍ have 2000 words written previously, and it wasn’t written as an dissertation format, so i would like to written as a dissertation format and more words added on with previous one. My topic title has changed t‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍o “The Modern Dancer: A consideration of the body of the ballerina within Modernity. “, so please change to this! i will attach the feedbacks from previous essay, and corrections that should be made‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍!