Dear writer, I have an assessment (essay) done but I would like the following to

Dear writer,
I have an assessment (essay) done but I would like the following to be done in order to gain high marks (required to be critical):
Kindly note I don’t want to have a new assessment from scratch.
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1) proofreading ( grammar check, 100% flow is perfect for the reader).
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2) follow the attached excellent exemplars for each section given by the tutor in order to score distinction. Note: follow only extract 1 & 2 of each as extract 3 shows how to score passing marks only.
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3) In the question paper (outline) I have highlighted in yellow the things which have to be checked in my paper if anything missing you will require to do the changes. especially it shows what is required to present in each section. (also comment in the paper so I can double-check this).
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4) grading excel sheet will be attached I want you to confirm both criteria are followed ( for the rating & Module-specific learning outcomes).
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5) in the paper itself I have just mentioned few things, especially in the conclusion as it’s not following the requirement since the requirement asking you (There is scope to give more consideration to the role of reflexivity in research and offer a personal reflection on engaging with the process of designing a research plan). please have a look at the paper as well to do the changes and please keep the comments so I can double check.
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