I need a comment on my discussion, also my job is work with domestic violence vi

I need a comment on my discussion, also my job is work with domestic violence victim. Make sure 150 words for each discuss. please see my attachment. How do you think, are you agree with my point or not. explain it. This is for Interpersonal & relationship violence course . Please refrain from vulgar, racial, sexist or any other remarks or comments that an individual might deem to be offensive. thanks