Improve vocabulary, Please swap out words for more descriptive and formal wordin

Improve vocabulary, Please swap out words for more descriptive and formal wording.
If you see that a sentence could be worded better, please rephrase for a professional sound.
Check for grammar errors.
Create a better closure, use what I have so far but embellish on it alot more. Tie it in to the statous quo and also why this is the school for me
Again please please improve the vocabulary I want it to sound as professional, studious, and intelligent as possible
Also if parts of the story don’t line up or doesn’t sound cohesive, feel free to replace with something better
please let me know if the story is structured well. Thank you thank you so much!

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