Please edit this draft of the essay according to these comments: Introduction: M

Please edit this draft of the essay according to these comments:
Introduction: Mention only two reasons to support using GMF in the thesis statemet. Currently three reasons have been provided.
Body: Counter-argument should start with the other people’s ideas, that GMF can harm people. Avoid providing a reason why people believe so right at the beginning of the paragraph (‘Due to inadequate knowledge about GM foods among people’ Paragraph 2). How do you know some people believe GMF can harm the body? What harm? You will need to cite a study which explains the counter-argument. Then, you could refute it by explaining why the evidence fails to convience. You should not explain why GMF could be used in this paragraph. Explain their advantages in Body 2 and 3.
Body 2 and 3 need a clear topic sentence at the beginning before you explain the benefits of GMF.
Conclusion: Conclusion should not present a new idea. In Body Paragraph 1, you offered only one reason for why some people oppose GMF while in conclusion, you mentioned ‘People only oppose this method of production due to different reasons’. Revise. Double check conclusion to ensure no new information has been offered. Cite the sources in the text.