This is the research paper on the death in Kafka’s The Metamorphosis. As you see

This is the research paper on the death in Kafka’s The Metamorphosis.
As you see attached file “Reviewed,” there are a lot of comments that needs to be fixed. But addition to this, I want this paper to be more or-ganized, and more professional. I also want this paper to talk deeply more about Existentialism related to Gregor Samsa’s death, and Camus’s Myth of Sisyphus.
I also attached the research paper syllabus on this.
Here is overall comments from professor: “Provide more direct citations. You need to better organize your essay to avoid repetition. Group Marxist analysis in one place, Darwinism in one place, Kafka’s identity and view of death in one place, etc. Avoid repetition.”
I want this paper’s introduction with interesting hook that can interest reader. Although it should be related to the topic or paper’s claim som-ehow.
The title also should be more like a title for research paper.
For conclusion, I just want better conclusion.