Hello I need help editing my paper. I alreadfy started a whole lot and I woul

Hello I need help editing my paper. I alreadfy started a whole lot and I woul like to be able to keep some if it make sense.
Can you please help me write it well especially the datas, methology and conclusions.
I will attached my paper that I already started its about: To what extent does a boy without a father grow up to be incarcerated, something like that. A fatherless family.
Also I’m attaching an example that my teacher provided
Also the RUBRICS or Instructions.
Thank you