Learning Goal: I’m working on a humanities discussion question and need an expla

Learning Goal: I’m working on a humanities discussion question and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.i need someone to revise my work based on the following teachers comments 2000 wordsWhat you have done well:1. A rationale for the chosen research focus wasgiven.2. The research methods were addressed, andsome reasons were given to justify the choice.What you should consider for the final proposal:1. The research topic is too broad – it covers manyaspects. When you said the differences betweenBritish and Chinese education systems, youmentioned curriculum, class system (the concept isnot clear), teaching methods, exams etc. I suggestchoosing one from these aspects as the researchfocus.2. Similarly, what levels of schooling are youthinking about when making comparison betweenBritish and Chinese education systems? Primary,secondary, college or university. I suggest choosingone level of education system as the focus.3. The research question is not clear (there is aresearch area, but not a research question). Thinkabout ‘what you want to find answers to’ throughthis research project.4. Many statements are over-generalised and lackof evidence. For example, ‘In China, the curriculumdesign focuses on exam-oriented education,British pay more attention to professional interest’.It is over-generalising (and inappropriate) to saythat they are the situations in whole China and theUK. Also, evidence is needed for such statements. Isuggest starting from other literatures, takingrelevant evidence and statements made by otherresearchers, in forming your own questions.5. You addressed using interviews (semistructuredones and via video calls) as researchmethods, and you gave some reasons for thechoice, which was good. However, some of yourunderstanding of the research methods wasproblematic. For example, ‘the structured interviewdoes not allow the interviewees to have ethechange to tell their own stories’. With certain kindsof questions, the structured interview does stillgive space to such kind of answer. The choice ofyour participants was also problematic. I suggestfinding a better way of choosing participants(reading relevant literatures on this will behelpful).Well-done for what you have got so far. The draftneeds a lot of work, but I am looking forward toseeing developments of this draft.
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