Your final project should include eight to ten pages of written material (2,000

Your final project should include eight to ten pages of written material (2,000 to 2,500 words) about your topic, a bibliography of at least 8 to 10 sources, and 6-10 visuals to illustrate your project.
Here is just draft.
My theme is about China’s Cultural Revolution. I see the suggestions you gave me. I agree with your point of view. I think I can focus on how it affected my grandfather and the nation, and how it influenced my grandfather’s artistic style and later success，But there is a small problem that my grandfather is about architecture, but he is not an architectural designer. There may be some design parts, but he is mainly civil engineering. I want to discuss this. On the one hand, I want to talk about the impact of the Cultural Revolution on Chinese architectural design, and on the other hand, I want to talk about the impact of the Cultural Revolution on my grandfather’s joining the army, including his artistic ideas.
I’ve sent the document, and there are several points that need to be strengthened or modified.
1. When my grandfather was young, his father died because of famine. Influence on him. It can be expanded
2. My grandfather is a civil engineer, not an architectural designer. But occasionally paint oil paintings
3. My grandfather joined the army when he was young. China’s cultural revolution has had a profound impact
My theme is the impact of the Chinese Cultural Revolution on art. Please discuss civil engineering, architectural design and painting respectively. There needs to be some transition. From the civil engineering of Chinese architecture to the influence of architectural design.