Hello I just uploaded a literature review which I am looking forward to publish,

Hello
I just uploaded a literature review which I am looking forward to publish, I want to check if the theme is right or wrong? Please can you read all over the paper and check whether it is ready to get published or no?
I know that a literature review which must contain at least three basic elements: an introduction or background information section; the body of the review containing the discussion of sources; and, finally, a conclusion and/or recommendations section to end the paper.
In the Abstract I want to mentioned Purpose, Design/ Methodology/ approach, Findings, originality/value, keyword, and paper type
The other thing is that, while comparing Kuwait to Jordan their should be a good reason why we chose Jordan? or we can delete Jordan and make as general comparing it with other countries with similar weather, geography.
And finally the last thing which is so important their should be a ” Review Study” we shouldn’t mention other people studies. For example we should have our own table and filled with studies and comparing them together, not to use one person review
Thank You