H‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍i , I have received the feedback from the previous work don

H‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍i , I have received the feedback from the previous work done, unfortunately it wasn’t a pass. the tutor allow me to make some changes in order to pass. I will upload the fe‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍edback form , the form they use to assess if we make the changes they have suggested, and the paper that I have submitted. I really hope that you could help me. Many thanks‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍.