Hey, first of all, thank you for the paper. Second of all, I received feedback

Hey, first of all, thank you for the paper.
Second of all, I received feedback from my professor. Now I just need to rewrite a couple of points based on the feedback provided. Thank you.
Feedback –
– Industry analysis, not just lululemon
– You need to clearly state level of force/threat in each category – it’s missing in several.
– Too many bullet points (8-9 i1.3 &4) without obvious conclusion,.
– This would be a good first draft but then you need to condense, keep only the key points and clearly state the conclusion – level of force/threat.
– What is the overall attractiveness of the industry?

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